RandomGeek Posted March 13, 2007 Report Share Posted March 13, 2007 Have to turn this pos essay I did in 20 minutes about cheese at school soon. ANyone want to edit it for me and look for grammar/all that english stuff? -The history of cheese dates back to prehistoric times. Cheese is made in a surprising way, which takes a lot of time and practice. It can be made many different ways, from many different animals. It doesn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tanis-HalfTrade Posted March 13, 2007 Report Share Posted March 13, 2007 im sorry that i cant help....english is my thing and all but, i started to read that essay and realized real quickly that i just dont care enough about cheese to go through that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
foxshox Posted March 13, 2007 Report Share Posted March 13, 2007 POS essay is right, sorry but it is too basic to fix, without just rewriting everything. Yeah and what Tanis said about the cheese. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uker Posted March 13, 2007 Report Share Posted March 13, 2007 No offense but you. Really need to get some. Grammar help. On that essay. The periods are in all the wrong places, and it makes it really hard to read. I didnt read it all to be honest, i read the intro and that was enough for me to realise that you need to rewrite it and space it out with more paragraphs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Seto Posted November 22, 2010 Report Share Posted November 22, 2010 +1 Don't bump old posts, also +1 is spamming and against site rules, don't do it again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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